Persuasive+writing

 __**This story is about how I think Suzuki is the best off road motor bike ever **__

__ Suzuki is the best off road bike ever __ They are simply the best and will all was be the best because they are yellow they look better than all the other bikes and I think that Suzuki’s are the best kids motocross ever made. If you ever go and ride one watch out for the power band because when I went on one I hit power band in first gear and the front wheel lifted up and I almost feel off the back. No other 85cc make can do and they do not have that much power. If this isn’t enough to convince you I think you should go and ride an Rm 85 and then come back and tell me about the ride of your life time. By Ryan



__**This year my class is going on a ski trip so we had to try and convince our parents to let us go**__

__ Dear mummy __ My class is going on a ski trip and I happen to wonder if you, my lovely mother will let me go. The reason I would like to go is because it will be a good experience and I will learn lots and I will become a more responsible person. Just imagine me, you’re lovely little son playing in the snow and growing up to be a mature self managing person. Can you just imagine playing in the snow with your friends and having the chance to actually feel that soft snow hit your face just like you see on the television? This is a chance to experience a snow smacking, ski tripping, snow ball fighting opportunity. On this trip Room 17 will be planning a terrific trip that I have just been talking to you about. In this opportunity we have been trusted to plan our ski trip which on it we will be doing a various amount of activities. By Ryan and Jerram

__my goals__
 * Commonly used words are spelt correctly
 * Mostly correct use of full stops, capitals, commas, exclamation marks speech marks and question marks
 * Ideas are beginning to be organised into paragraphs